THE WEBSITE COPY AUDIT THAT TRANSFORMS VISITORS INTO TRUE BELIEVERS
The must-have copy audit helping service providers and creative founders turn their business from 'another option' to 'the only choice.'
Copywriting that calls in dream clients,
prequalifies leads, and makes sales calls a formality.
*Limited Time Only*
Right now, your words are selling you short. You're over explaining your work, watching dream clients hesitate (or walk away entirely), and stuck with messaging that sounds fine but doesn't feel like you.
You might be a ‘pretty good’ writer. But there are psychological triggers, storytelling arcs, and sales-driven copy that need to work hard for you to book clients.
they're actively working against the very expertise you've spent years cultivating.
If your dream clients are landing on your site but not booking, your words aren't just failing to connect —
YOUR WEBSITE IS UNDERMINING YOUR STORY.
That's where the Complete Copy Audit comes in…
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"Working with Kayla on my website audit was one of the easiest "yeses" I've made for my business. Before the audit, I knew something wasn’t clicking with my copy. It sounded good, but I knew it wasn’t converting the way it should. But I also knew that I was too close to it to see what needed to shift. Kayla delivered exactly what I needed: a clear, thoughtful, strategic outside perspective. It felt like sitting down with a friend who gets your business and your audience and isn’t afraid to lovingly call out where things could be better. The suggestions she made weren’t just helpful, they were incredibly specific and actionable. I was able to start implementing changes immediately, which is a big deal for someone who values simplicity and momentum. What really surprised me (in the best way) was how easily she stepped into the shoes of my ideal client. Her feedback helped me reframe my messaging in a way that feels aligned, clear, and high-converting all without losing my voice."
"If you’re feeling too in the weeds of your own copy to see the gaps (or you just want someone smart, strategic, and easy to work with), this is what you need."
Kara Duncan, The Kara Report
This isn't just a surface-level review or simple line edits. This is a comprehensive diagnosis of the story your website is currently telling — and more importantly, the story it should be telling instead.
The Website Copy Audit
A precision intervention for websites that should be converting but aren't.
Your website has become a liability rather than an asset — a place where potential clients go to talk themselves out of working with you rather than into it.
You're tired of hearing "I'll think about it" from prospects who seemed so enthusiastic until they visited your site.
You keep getting asked questions that your website should already be answering, creating endless explanation cycles that drain your energy.
You've raised your rates (or want to), but your messaging still positions you as accessible rather than exceptional.
You sense a disconnect between the transformation you deliver and the way you're articulating it online.
Most of all? You're too immersed in your own expertise to see what truly sets you apart in a crowded market.
This Copy Audit Is Your Turning Point
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What The Copy Audit Delivers
An Unflinching Analysis of Your Current Narrative
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Every page of your core website (home, about, services, and contact) dissected through the lens of both conversion psychology and literary technique. You'll see exactly where your words create distance instead of connection, confusion instead of clarity, hesitation instead of conviction.
Strategic Diagnosis of Your Brand's Unique Position
A clear identification of the narrative threads that make your work distinct, with specific guidance on how to weave these threads through every aspect of your copy. No more blending in with industry jargon or drowning in safe language.
Line-by-Line Annotated Suggestions
Precise recommendations for transforming weak or generic copy into powerful, conversion-focused language that maintains your authentic voice while elevating your perceived value. You'll understand not just what to change, but why each change matters.
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A Personal Video Walkthrough of Your Website's Story Arc
A one-to-one, 30-minute Loom recording where I walk through your site as both a skilled copywriter and a potential client, highlighting the emotional journey your words create and revealing the subtle shifts that transform passive browsers into eager clients.
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Voice of Customer Translation Cheatsheet
A breakdown of how your ideal clients actually describe their problems and desires, creating a bridge between their language and your expertise. This alone will transform your ability to create immediate recognition and trust.
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All delivered within 14 days.
Most websites describe a business.
But when those carefully cultivated followers finally click through to your website, something shifts. The magic dissipates. The connection fades. And instead of the immediate "yes" you deserve, you're met with silence — or worse, tepid inquiries from clients who question your worth.
This isn't a design problem. This is a story problem.
The words on your website aren't just failing to capture your brilliance — they're actively diluting it. They're reducing your years of expertise into lukewarm platitudes. They're turning your unique methodology into forgettable noise. They're making you sound like everyone else, when in reality, there is no one who does what you do, the way you do it.
Mine makes sure yours sells it.
This isn't just another copywriter looking for grammar errors or suggesting more bullet points.
When I audit your copy, I'm not just looking at what you say — I'm examining how you say it, where you say it, and most importantly, what you're not saying that you should be.
I'll identify:
Where you're burying your most compelling differentiators beneath generic industry language or hiding them so deep that no one finds them.
Where your messaging creates intrigue but fails to resolve it — leaving potential clients interested but ultimately confused about the specific value you provide.
The exact places where stronger, more precise language would instantly elevate your perceived expertise and justify premium pricing.
The narrative threads that, when properly amplified, turn your business from another option into the only choice.
Why This Works:
The Literary Advantage
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“I wrote my entire website myself, and while I knew it wasn’t bad per se, it’s always hard to objectively review your own work. It’s made me hesitant to really share my website because of this. As a sensitive girly, the concept of an audity is kind of terrifying tbh. Paying someone to tell you everything you’re doing is wrong is not a fun idea. It’s inherently pretty vulnerable. But I just have to say, Kayla made me feel SO validated and understood in the process. She gave helpful feedback with extreme kindness and care.”
“Kayla made me feel so validated and understood in the process.”
Bryn, Grey and Gold
The Wordsmith Intensive
We take the exact edits from your audit and implement them together, live. Not a full rewrite — a targeted fix of the specific problems bleeding your conversions.
In just a few hours, your website goes from "sounds good but I'm not sure if it's for me" to "this person clearly gets my exact problem and can solve it."
Get Kayla's Help Rewriting Your Copy
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why buy this?
- Get my help outside of a full project – this is a rare opportunity to get personalized help in a rapid-fire intensive
- Skip the waiting and get clarity now – the longer your copy sits on your site, the more it’s costing you sales, opportunities, and dream client projects. Let’s fix that.
- Know exactly what’s wrong AND fix it, stat. While the audit identifies where you’re holding back, the intensive helps you make the big changes, without overthinking or accidentally watering down the impact.
- STRATEGY CALL: We’ll spend a collaborative hour together on Google Meet taking a deeper dive into the line-by-line edits, screen-share style, with time for detailed questions, adjustments made in real time, and higher-level messaging strategy.
- PLUS: The option to bring additional pages to our meeting to understand how they fit into the picture of your other website pages.
- WRITING TIME from me, post-call: That’s right– this isn’t just a ‘pick my brain’ moment. After we hang up, I’ll spend the next 2 hours getting to work on the biggest areas of improvement that we identified for your audit– punching up headlines, rewriting service descriptions, and making those call to actions burst with “holy shit I need this now” energy.
- YOUR COPY, POLISHED: I’ll send over your core pages in a shiny new document noting key changes– all ready for you to copy and paste into your website.
- 1 WEEK OF SLACK MESSAGING SUPPORT so you can ask any burning questions about your copy or messaging and get crystal clarity around those things you always wanted to ask a copywriter outside of a full project.
Exactly what you’re getting:
Examples of what we can work on:
- Sharpening your current headlines to create immediate clarity about who you serve
- Service descriptions transformed into "holy shit, I need this" moments
- Your about page revised to build authority instead of just listing credentials
- Weak calls-to-action replaced with language that creates urgency
- Wishy-washy, sounds-like-everyone-else phrases turned into confident, conversion-focused copy
What you'll walk away with...
Words Build Worlds.
Because sometimes the difference between crickets and clients isn't a complete rebrand. It's not a new photoshoot. It's not even a new offer.
Sometimes, it's simply finding the right words to tell the story your work deserves.
Let's write that story together.
Let's Make Yours Unforgettable.
- Kayla
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